The flow chart describes the manufacturing process of instant noodles.
總結，instant noodles 從麵粉到將泡面貼上標示密封，此製作流程分成單向和八個步驟，
Overall, instant noodles are made from flour until they are labeled and sealed. The process is an eight-step and linear process.
Overall, using flour make up the noodles an eight-step linear process to produce instant noodles in which process is from flour making to labeled.
Overall, there is a eight-step and linear process to produce instant noodles, which process is from flour to labeled the
step1⭢2:
1.儲存在silos的flour和水和油混合。
Flour is storaged in a silos. After that, it is mixed with water and oils.
2.被儲存在silos的flour被與水和油混合，變成麵團。
Flour that was storaged in silos is mixed with water and oil and become a dough.
step2⭢3:
麵團被roller壓扁變成dough sheets再變成dough strips
Following that, the dough become dough sheets by pressing the dough using rollers.
Following that, the dough is rolled to becoming the dough sheets.
step2⭢3⭢4:
Following that, the dough become into dough sheets and into strips by pressing the dough using rollers.
Following that, the dough sheets that is made from using rollers to press the dough is striped into noodles.
改Following that, the dough sheets, which is made from using rollers to press the dough, is striped into noodles.
🧠 來看兩個例子比較：
1️⃣ 限定用法：沒有逗號，可以用 that
The dough sheets that are made by using rollers are thinner than others.
👉（意思是：這些是比較薄的 那一些，不是全部）
2️⃣ 非限定用法：有逗號，只能用 which
The dough sheets, which are made by using rollers, are cut into noodles.
👉（意思是：順便補充說明一下，所有的 dough sheets 都是用 roller 做的）
step5⭢6:
把麵方入杯子前，面有經過加熱和乾燥。
前：Form the noodles are form into discs(discs可數名詞). They are cooked with oil and be dried, before put they on cups.
後：The noodles are formed into discs. They are cooked with oil and dried before being put into cups.
👑~The noodles are shaped into discs, cooked in oil, dried, and then placed into cups.
The noodles are formed/ shaped into discs. They are cooked with oil and dried, before being put into cups.
「在某件被動的事情發生之前」，這種情況下：
before + being + 過去分詞（Vpp）
這是一種被動語態的動名詞結構。
✅ 結構說明：
「put」是原形動詞，
「put into cups」是被放入杯子，
如果你要說「在被放進杯子之前」，就要用：
before being put into cups
因為主詞「noodles」是被放入杯子，不是主動放進去的，
所以用 被動語態 + 動名詞（being + Vpp）。
noodle discs（不用加複數的 "noodles" 來當形容詞）
或更自然一點直接說：discs（前文已說是「noodles」）
The noodles are formed into discs ✅
The noodles are formed into noodle discs ✅（較具體）把麵方入杯子前，面有經過加熱和乾燥。
前：Before being put the noodles into cups, they are cooked with oil and (are與前面一樣，可省略) dried.
改後：Before the noodles are put into cups, they are cooked with oil and dried.
～Before being put into cups, they are cooked with oil and dried.
「being put」是正確的被動動名詞結構，但不能再接主詞「the noodles」，這樣會變得不通順。
把「the noodles」當主詞，就不能用動名詞結構，要回到完整句型。
✅ 改法一（完整句）：
Before the noodles are put into cups…
→ 用「主詞 + 被動動詞」表示時間副詞子句。
✅ 改法二（省略主詞，動名詞形式）：
Before being put into cups, they are…
→ 前提是讀者已經知道主詞是「the noodles」。
Before the noodles are put into cups, they are cooked with oil and dried.
The noodles are first formed into discs. Then, they are cooked with oil and dried. Finally, they are placed into cups.（placed into不太正式）
After being formed into discs, the noodles are cooked with oil and dried before being placed into cups.
～After being formed into discs, the noodles are cooked with oil and dried before being put into cups.
7👑After being formed into discs, the noodles are then cooked with oil and dried before finally being put into cups.
| 句子 | 有沒有 then | 感覺 |
|---|---|---|
| The noodles are cooked with oil and dried. | 沒有 then | 很普通，步驟列出來但不強調順序 |
| The noodles are then cooked with oil and dried. | 有 then | 感覺比較清晰、有邏輯順序，尤其適合描述流程 |
✨ 主詞一致的省略原則：
英文中，當主句和副詞子句的主詞相同時，
➡️ 副詞子句中的主詞可以省略，
➡️ 動詞變為 V-ing 或 being + Vpp（如果是被動語態）
step6⭢8:
將處理過的面放入杯子的同時，也放入Vegetables & spices，最後貼上標籤和密封。
前：While the processed noodle discs are been putting into cups, put vegetables and spices into it. Finally, the cups of instant noodle are labeled and sealed before being merchandizes.
後：While the processed noodle discs are being put into cups, vegetables and spices are added. Finally, the cups of instant noodles are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
用are being put ，現在進行被動語態是：are being + 過去分詞（put）
✅ 正確用法：are being put into cups（正被放入杯子中）
改成vegetables and spices are added into the cups.
原句是祈使句（put...），但語氣跟前後不一致
更自然的表達方式是：「...are added」（被加入）
還有「into it」不夠清楚，建議省略 it 或改為明確名詞
✅ 正確用法：vegetables and spices are added
（或：...are added into the cups 也可以）
改成the cups of instant noodles，「noodle」是可數名詞 → 通常搭配「instant noodles（複數）」表示食物總稱；就像說「a bowl of noodles」而不是「a bowl of noodle」
改成before being merchandised.(副詞子句，補充時間)
因為副詞子句沒有主詞所以用being merchandised(p.p.)→ 「被販售」的意思
用「before being merchandised」= 在被販售之前 ✅
正確的動詞是 merchandise（動詞）
正統英式/雅思常用的是：merchandise（動詞/名詞(u.)兩用）
👑While the processed noodle discs are being put into cups, vegetables and spices are added. Finally, the cups of instant noodles are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
前：The processed noodle discs are put into cups, vegetables and spices put into at the same time.Finally, the cups of instant noodle are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
at the same time 是時間副詞不是連接詞所以要放 [and] vegetables and spices are put 但是這裡用are added更順，省略into，因為後面直接加時間副詞，前面也有提到put into cups。
後：The processed noodle discs are put into cups, and vegetables and spices are added at the same time. Finally, the cups of instant noodles are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
👑～The processed noodle discs are placed into cups, with vegetables and spices added at the same time. Finally, the cups of instant noodles are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
🌟「being」用法
being 是 動名詞（gerund），而且在被動語態中用來表示「正在被⋯⋯」
它後面一定要接 過去分詞（past participle, Vpp），表示被動狀態。
| 結構 | 範例 | 中文意思 |
|---|---|---|
| being + 過去分詞 (Vpp) | The documents are being printed. | 文件正在被印刷。 |
| before being + 過去分詞 | before being sent | 在被寄送之前 |
| after being + 過去分詞 | after being packed | 在被包裝之後 |
加入連接詞
Rewrite-
The flow chart illustrates a process, how do instant noodles make before they become goods.
Overall, using flour make into doughs, until cups of noodles are labeled and sealed. There is an eight-step and linear process.
Firs of all, flour is mixed with water and oil , before then flour was stored at silos. The flour is formed into doughs and then using rollers to press the doughs into dough sheets. Then the dough sheets are striped into noodles. After the noodles is shaped into noodle discs, the discs are cooked and dried. While the processed noodle discs are put into cups, vegetables and spices are put into the cups. In the final step, the cups of instant noodles are sticked product labels on and sealed before being merchandised.
改：
The flow chart illustrates the process of how instant noodles are made before they become commercial products.
❌「how do instant noodles make」語序錯誤（不能用疑問句語序）
Overall, flour is made into dough, and the process continues until the cups of noodles are labeled and sealed. It is a linear process consisting of eight main steps.
用 被動語態 → flour is made into dough
「doughs」是錯誤用法（dough 是不可數）
eight-step and linear process → 更自然地說：It is a linear process consisting of eight main steps.
First of all, flour is stored in silos before being mixed with water and oil.
事件順序錯了，應該先儲存再混合
用 before being mixed 是正確的被動語態連接句型
The mixture is formed into dough and flattened into sheets using rollers. After that, the sheets are cut into noodle strips.
❌ using rollers to press → 主詞不明，需改為被動或明確結構
❌ dough（不可數）
❌ striped → 應為 cut into strips（或：shredded）
Once the noodles are shaped into discs, they are cooked in oil and dried. While the processed noodle discs are being put into cups, vegetables and spices are added.
主詞一致：noodles are, not is
用「once」或「after**」引導條件/時間
| 連接詞 | 意思 | 範例 |
|---|---|---|
| after | 在⋯⋯之後 | After the noodles are cooked, they are dried. |
| once | 一旦⋯⋯之後（強調順序） | Once the noodles are shaped into discs, they are cooked and dried. |
After the noodles are shaped into noodle discs...或
Once the noodles are shaped into noodle discs...
都對，只是 once 比較自然地強調「一旦完成這步，就會接著進行下一步」。
In the final step, the cups of instant noodles are labeled and sealed before being merchandised.
sticked ❌ → sick過去分詞是 stuck，但更自然的用法是直接說 labeled
「are labeled and sealed」是常見搭配「are put into」可以改成更簡潔自然的 are added
未改：
Firstly, before flour is mixed with water and oil, flour was stored at silos. After then, rollers are used to press the doughs, which is made from the flour, into dough sheets. They are striped into noodles before being formed into noodle discs. The discs are cooke and dried . Following that, while the processed noodle discs that are put into cup, vegetables and species are added into it.
Firstly, before flour is mixed with water and oil, flour was stored at silos. After then, the doughs, which is made from the flour, are pressed into dough sheets by using rollers
rollers are used to press the doughs into dough sheets.
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